Doctrines
Close Order Drill
Abhumans
Afriel Strain (AS)
Drop Troops
Veterans

HQ
Command Platoon
Senior Officer w/power fist, laspistol
squad w/2xflamer, CCW's&laspistols, AS - 92pts

Anti tank squad w/3xlascannon, AS - 115pts

HQ total - 207pts

Elites

Hardened Veterans
vet. sgt. w/bolter
4 veterans w/3xplasmagun - 76pts

Hardened Veterans
vet. sgt. w/bolter
4 veterans w/3xplasmagun - 76pts

Hardened Veterans
vet. sgt. w/bolter
4 veterans w/plasmagun, 2xmeltagun - 76pts

Elites total - 228pts

Troops

Inf. Platoon
Command Section
Junior Officer w/power weapon, bolt pistol
squad w/2xflamer, CCW's&laspistols, AS - 62pts

inf. squad w/missile launcher, grenade launcher, AS - 88pts
inf. squad w/missile launcher, grenade launcher, AS - 88pts
Remnant squad w/4 guardsmen, meltagun, AS
sgt. w/CCW, laspistol - 45pts

Platoon total - 283pts

Inf. Platoon
Command Section
Junior Officer w/power weapon, laspistol
squad w/2xflamer, CCW's&laspistols, AS - 61pts

inf. squad w/missile launcher, grenade launcher, AS - 88pts
inf. squad w/autocannon, grenade launcher, AS - 88pts
Remnant squad w/4 guardsmen, meltagun, AS
sgt. w/CCW, laspistol - 45pts

Platoon total - 282pts

Troops total - 565pts

Army total - 1000pts

Models - 86

Tactics: Sit. Shoot. Repeat.
Vet's deep strike to take out tanks and lonely charachters.

Remnants and command squads act as "Anti-Assault" units.

Comments? Too "Power Play" (if you can do that with Guard)?

looks kinda nice, but i dont understand why you use only 5 guys in every elite choice.
that means that they will have to run away much faster than a squad with more ppl in it