LURKING IN THE DARK -PIC

hivefleetbrawn · by **hivefleetbrawn** » Wed Nov 23, 2011 10:18 pm

I tried to get a sense of movement in the dark.

mattjgilbert · by **mattjgilbert** » Thu Nov 24, 2011 9:39 am

Good idea. I think the light on the beast in the tunnel is not quiet right though. More purple maybe like the colour on the walls?

hivefleetbrawn · by **hivefleetbrawn** » Thu Nov 24, 2011 1:59 pm

mattjgilbert wrote: I think the light on the beast in the tunnel is not quiet right though. More purple maybe like the colour on the walls?

Yes I had a lot of trouble with the light- you are right.

hivefleetbrawn · by **hivefleetbrawn** » Thu Nov 24, 2011 2:31 pm

Following good advice I have tried to improve the lighting and colour. It looks better to me though I am colour blind :oops:

timewizard · by **timewizard** » Thu Nov 24, 2011 2:46 pm

hivefleetbrawn wrote:Following good advice I have tried to improve the lighting and colour. It looks better to me though I am colour blind

I like the green color of the aquilla! :wink:

The beast at the end of the tunnel is a bit hard to make out. Maybe add glowing eyes?

jlong05 · by **jlong05** » Thu Nov 24, 2011 4:36 pm

Is that flamer supposed to being held by a unit on the stairs? If so it looks a bit odd as its more just floating their.

ruffian4 · by **ruffian4** » Thu Nov 24, 2011 5:56 pm

What flamer, what monster, what?

hivefleetbrawn · by **hivefleetbrawn** » Thu Nov 24, 2011 9:08 pm

I agree, its all valid citique - I shall return to the drawing board. :eusa_doh

mattjgilbert · by **mattjgilbert** » Thu Nov 24, 2011 9:16 pm

I think if you go back to the first image but just adjust the light falling on the lurker that would solve that problem. The light elsewhere was fine.

As for the flamer, perhaps if you somehow make it more obvious someone is holding it that would be better. Cast the silhouette of the person holding it onto the floor (and wall?) and maybe show their hand?