KInG wrote:one concern though, its a long way on and off in 6 turns
I thought so as well. Seems that unless the allies can get the VIP into a vehicle, there is no way to get him off the short table edge.
Would it be better maybe that the allies have to get the VIP off any table edge in the Allies Outflanking Zone? Or perhaps off and table edge within a certain distance from the allies short table edge?
I don't know how far Bolt Action units move in a turn.
Also, you designated the German Deployment Zone, but not the Allies Deployment Zone, unless they are all supposed to move on the table in turn 1, but it doesn't specify that in the scenario rules.
Other than that, looks like a very interesting scenario and game, well thought out!